问题补充:
根据汉语提示及要求,以Sally’s Dream为题写一篇短文.
提示: 1.Sally是一个中学生,她想成为一名职业演员.
2.她同时也是一名志愿者,经常参加一些志愿者服务活动,业余时间她还上表演课.
3.现在她遇到了一些麻烦,无钱上表演课.她想出了许多办法,如: 打电话给家长、主动辅导孩子的美术、张贴启事寻找工作挣钱等。
4.问题解决了,她可以继续上课了,她的梦想会实现的。
要求:1、条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
2、不少于80个单词。
Sally’s Dream
Sally is a middle school student; she wants to become a professional actor. She is also a volunteer, often takes part in some volunteer service activities. In her spare time, she also has acting lessons.
答案:
(答案→)Sally is a middle school student; she wants to become a professional actor. She is also a volunteer, often takes part in some volunteer service activities. In her spare time, she also has acting lessons.
解析:这是一篇给材料作文,所给内容十分详细,在组织文章时注意时态和句式结构正确就可以了。
【亮点说明】这篇短文注意到了叙述事件时的时态变化,能适当的运用连词和国定短语。文章要点全,几乎没有语病错误。能适当的发挥。
根据汉语提示及要求 以Sally’s Dream为题写一篇短文.提示: 1.Sally是一个中学生 她想成为一名职业演员. 2.她同时也是一名志愿者 经常参加一些志愿者服务活动 业